[br][size=5]Dog that Stands like a Stone[/size]
[size=4] of The Tribe of Rushing Water
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[br]Pelt: Cinnamon and white
Eyes: Blue
[br]I am a coarse-coated she-cat with large eyes and forward-folded ears. I am very sensitive to criticism, but I learn very quickly from my mistakes.
[br]My mentor was abusive to me and then I killed him, but nobody knows I did.
i would like to join eclipseclan, hears the thing on my cat...
Username:thornnose
Cat Color:black tom with white smudges
Eye Color:oak brown
Rank:apprentice
Warrior Name:thornnose
Description:has a deeply torn right ear and unusually long claws.
Anything Else:is very mysterious and does not like being in large crowds, and is very ambitious...
mate:none
siblings:dead
ooc: who is my mentor?
thornpaw sturdily paced in to camp looking proud of his catch, he dropped 2 mice, and a thrush in to the fresh kill pile.
thornpaw padded over to icepaw and sat by her,"i caught that thrush you know..." thornpaw mewed to her calmly.
"yes ive heard of them. why?" thornpaw mewed
"can i be in your group?" thornnose asked icepaw.
"well, how about we go now to look for your friend brick, we can try to kill one of them at a time and we can try to kill one now." thorntail meowed.
"were here to kill one of the wolves!" thornpaw yowled at brick leaping in front of icepaw unsheathing his claws yowling.
"oh, sorry, i thought you were ya know an evil rogue." thornpaw meowed embaressed. 
they all went on through. at some point they reached a cave.
brick, began to tell us to run. a huge black wolf appeared from the entrance of the cave behind it were two timber wolves, and the grey wolf, seemed to be gone."wheres the grey wolf you told me about!" thornpaw meowed in a worried voice.
thornpaw lept on the face and began scratching at its eyes. after some moments of scratching while the grey wolf shook all around, the wolf went blind."get it!" thornpaw yowled to his two friends but brick was too busy fending off the other three wolves.
thornpaw got to his feet wearily and asked rabbitpaw,"who are you?"
OOC: does that mean your dead nightstar?
thornpaw launched himself on to one of the timber wolves hind legs then raked deeply down its leg. the timber wolf lept in to the air and landed on its side. it whined and cried.
"kill it now icepaw, put it out of its mysery!" thornpaw yowled at icepaw.
ooc: there are 26 wolves left! the leader is the black wolf, there are no more black wolves. the last timber wolf fled and is gone, the white wolf is pregnant.
2 are dead, 28 are left, one wolf fled. its gone now
after the wolf leaders death 20 wolves fleed for there master had been murdered, although there are five wolves left.
thornpaw padded proudly and sturdily to his leader.
"i do"he meowed dipping his head.
"Hey whats going on over here!" todd padded over to the bloodclan cats, the bell on his collar jingling. he strided over to eveningstorm. "hi E.S., whats up!?" todd asked loudly to his friend, his glossy coat gleaming in the moonlight.
